story updates

added reddit comic
edited and formatted epilogue

intro.gd

@@ -4,21 +4,25 @@ extends Control
 func _ready() -> void:
 	$Slideshower.play_slideshow([
 		{ "image": "Daydreaming",
-		  "text": "Ever since he was a wee lad, Mr. Rhombini had always had one dream - to fly around in a blinged up jetpack." },
+		  "text": "Ever since he was a wee lad, Mr. Rhombini always had one dream." },
+		{ "image": "Obsessing",
+		  "text": "He would stay up all night researching. The internet was abuzz with talks of Ancient Technology." },
 		{ "image": "res://art/keyart_thumb.png",
-		  "text": "The internet has been abuzz with talks of a legendary Pharaoh's jetpack. Mr. Rhombini's day has come." },
+		  "text": "When Mr. Rhombini heard of the legendary Pharaoh's jetpack, he could feel himself becoming obsessed." },
 		{ "image": "Journey", 
-		  "text": "Under the cover of night, Mr. Rhombini sneaks into the famous pharaoh's pyramid. This night, of all nights, it seems to glow with strange energy." },
+		  "text": "Under the cover of night, Mr. Rhombini decided to sneak into the pyramid." },
 		{ "image": "Goatcaphagus",
-		  "text": "Mr. Rhombini stumbles upon an unusual sarcophagus, a blend of ancient craftsmanship and advanced technology. The antenna have been disconnected." },
+		  "text": "Mr. Rhombini stumbled upon an unusual sarcophagus. He notices that the antenna have been disconnected." },
 		{ "image": "Activate",
-		  "text": "Mr. Rhombini excitedly connects the antenna. The sarcophagus begins to hum." },
+		  "text": "Mr. Rhombini excitedly connects the antenna. He hears the Ancient Technoloy begin to hum." },
 		{ "image": "Nicegoat",
-		  "text": "The sarcophagus swings open to reveal, not a dead body, but an old computer. The computer begins to boot up, but an error message is visible on the main screen." },
+		  "text": "The sarcophagus swings open to reveal, not a dead body, but a mysterious machine. 
+The Ancient Technology begins to boot up, but an error message is visible on the main screen." },
 		{ "images": ["PossessedbyOC", "Power_source"],
-		  "text": "However, Mr. Rhombini's attention is instantly grabbed by the other object inside the open sarcophagus." },
+		  "text": "Mr. Rhombini's attention is instantly grabbed by the other object inside the open sarcophagus." },
 		{ "image": "Glow",
-		  "text": "The Pharaoh's jetpack! Mr. Rhombini wastes no time in putting it on." }
+		  "text": "The Pharaoh's jetpack! The legends were true! It's definitely not cursed!
+Mr. Rhombini wastes no time putting on the Pharaoh's Jetpack." }
 	])
 
 func _on_slideshower_finished_playing() -> void: